Manga Critique
Manga Critique
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Please reveiw my manga story!! <3?
well.. i had this idea for a manga but i'm going to try and sum it up as best as i can. its about a boy that's a demon and can live many lives and sees the future and in his last lifetime he saw the girl who would meet him in the next and he fell in love with her and waited for her so when the lifetime came when he could meet her he watched over her till she was about 13 and than revealed to him what he was but there were more than one some of them were her friend too but the demons are planning to attack everyone to make their own world by destroying all the humans so her boyfriend/husband and about 5 friends try to protect everyone. that's as far as i got... do you think its good? please say your HONEST opinion please critique it as much as you can... thank yous!! ~<3
well, i'm kinda confused about the hole past/future/other lives things so your going to have to make that really clear in the manga or else everybody might just give up on it cause they can't understand it, and you might need a few more people cause i don't really see how just 6 people can protect a hole planet alone, but once you get past those 2 issues, it sounds like a really good series ^_^
